This is a pretty full page that really presents one piece of info. If I had my druthers, I’d probably go back and make it about half the panels. Hugh did a good job with it, though! Particularly Max’s expression in Panel 4, and also the wide that establishes the village.


I actually disagree about cutting panels. I personally would have added a page instead. The top of the page was something that I really pushed for, as I wanted to use several panels and wide shots to establish this quiet stillness here. It also gives both Max and the readers a small moment to breath a little after all the flying and shooting and crashing. I still really like the hard shadows here, especially in the wide panel five.
– Cartographer