Foreshadowing is tricky. You want to give the audience something to puzzle over but that won’t captivate their attention. For the crosshairs panel on this page, it’s a pretty big, noticeable clue. What I was hoping was that the immediate danger of the drone would make readers think either the crosshairs was the drone, or frankly just forget about it entirely. Not sure if it worked or not. Let me know, will ya?

– Chronicler

 

There was a time where I pitched to Joe that this be the first time we see Maxwell’s full face, and up till this point we only get glimpses of his face and posture as he escapes the drones. This proved to be a bit much to attempt, as waiting seventeen pages to reveal our hero is a bit of a stretch.

– Cartographer